Wednesday, July 4, 2012

Night Queen Comments

Rating: 4.5

It was deep midnight
the sky was crystal clear
millions not millions
but billions of stars
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ramesh rai
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Sajna Kailas 19 July 2012

ohhhhh.....How beautiful this poem. I have read it so many times. It is like a melody. The beauty and calmness of night is well pictured by the awesome poet! The farewell of 'night queen' and arrival of ' day king ' are presented very skillfully. I enjoyed a lot. loved it. You are awesome! God Bless You Dear!

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 July 2012

Night can well be depicted as a queen is observed from your poetry.Painted well the night.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 07 July 2012

lovely piece.............great work! !

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Captain Cur 06 July 2012

When I came to discover at a very young age that the stars were suns like ours, only much larger and so far away that they only appeared as pins of light, my relationship to the universe has never been the same. Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 04 July 2012

well imaginative poem. moon and Venus love is a new concept

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