Night Vision Poem by Sandra Fowler

Night Vision

Rating: 5.0


Let rain forever make gray music, Friend.
Such sadness makes a sweet sound on the glass.
I wonder if that white owl on the hill
Knows lonesome well enough to sing it down.

We cannot call back distant August days
When goldenrod had power to warm the soul.
And yet night vision is a wondrous thing.
It measures drops of darkness on old roofs.

Previously Published, 'Poetry Depth Quarterly'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 23 August 2008

This Night Vision is a very good vision over life...most realistic down to earth...the fragile glass and the gray music relate to old age and the past memories...the sweet sound- the reflective satisfaction the mind derives from bygone days and sadness- of course- never to come back those days... An artful imaginative write, Sandra...I like this poem very much the way I read 10+

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David Desantis 22 April 2008

Beautiful as ever! I sometimes wish I had night vision, its a whole different world when looking through the darkness

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Tom J. Mariani 07 November 2007

You have certainly warmed my soul with this one. You have again made a sweet sound on my old roof. Two attempts I have made with nature's annual cycle are 'October' and 'Beyond October.' You have reminded me 'We cannot call back distant August Days'...'And yet...' Much Thanks For This One Tom

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Mary Naylor 06 October 2007

Sandra, the beauty of you poetry gladdens the soul!

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Magda Graf 04 October 2007

In your poems I always feel how beauty and sadness merge to create a melancholy mood that touches the soul. Thank you for that, Magda

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 December 2009

how well you connect one to another...old memories to night vision...along with rain...in a lonely atmosphere....artistic and classy..

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 August 2009

Awesome metaphorical expression! fine wording! 10+

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 July 2009

hello dear ma'am! ! ! hey this is very flowery, lovey, , beautiful, lovely write indeed! ! ! .. and in a way this one is sort of Gothic aspect too! ! ! .. nice write ma'am with lots of love shan

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premji premji 08 May 2009

we drank the oceans of sadness just to feel the taste of tranquility.............

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Chitra - 07 September 2008

night vision wonderful metaphor depicting the essence of old memories

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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