Nightmare Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Nightmare

Rating: 5.0


Scattered bodies and venom blood
feelings of hatered runs like a flood

Taking over your body and soul
Showing how Life is Cruel

starting to feel the black hole inside your heart
where purity started to lose it's part

While every one dancing with Cruelty Rapper
You got stapped with Darkness Dagger

Smiling masks and glaring eyes
Uglyness no longer in disguise

Srounded by lauging voices
Distroying all of your Choices

and old wounds started to ooz again
marking your cloths with sadness stain

unconscious you dug that forgoten hole
and now you're on the edge preparing to fall

Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rajagopal haran 01 May 2008

soliloquy of a tortured soul..well written

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David Desantis 28 April 2008

Very powerful Sarah, deep and sad...This sounds like one nightmare I wouldn't want to be in.

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2008

All the rhymes aren't there Sarah but all you emotion and feelings are. I bet you're a real caring person. You are a caretaker of our human souls. Keep up your work. GW62

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Justin Mata 21 February 2008

Dark... just my taste. Good poem.

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