No One Can Understand Them Poem by Ray C.

No One Can Understand Them

Rating: 5.0


Once a pon a time, there lived Lucas and Tom.
They were walking through the forest to find some fruits to eat.
Tom: You know what? I am going out with a girl.
Lucas: Really? Is she bad?
Tom: What the heck are you talking about? She's an angel.
Lucas: I mean, she bad?
Tom: You mean is she bad at night?
Lucas: No, I mean is she pretty!
No one can understand them.

Mary is texting with her friend, Maria.
Mary: Hi!
Maria: hello! ! ! ! 11
Mary: Did u see dawn of the dead
Maria: Yes I did! it was really fun.
Mary: wait, fun?
Maria: yes it is!
Mary: ? ? ?
No one can understand them.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I want this poem to be funny. Thank you for reading. Also, sorry. I was really busy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

Is this intentional, I wonder: 'Once a pon a time' (the 'a pon' [sic] part I mean) This line gave me a little laugh: 'No one can understand them.'

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2. But, more often, I may fail to effectively communicate with you, even if we use the same language. Your poem highlights this fact. Congratulations. Good poem. Top score.

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M : ) 29 July 2022

Thank you so much for your nice comment! You know what I want the readers to find out. : )

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1. Hi Poet, There are thousands of languages used in the world. The very essence of the evolution and existence of a language is effective communication. (Contd)

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