No Originality Or Freshness In It Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

No Originality Or Freshness In It

Rating: 5.0


So you changed some things around and called this new?
Yours?
To have others believe it too!
And you know this isn't true.
Don't you?

Have you ever gone in someone's home?
And made suggestions
As to how they can arrange their furniture
To give the interior of their home a different presence?
It is still their furniture!
They recognize it.
You recognize it.
It belongs to them.
No matter how it has been arranged.

Same thing with stolen concepts.
Or a poet 'borrowing' ideas.
No matter how it has been arranged,
The creating brain knows from where it came.

There is no such thing as 'borrowing' someone else's ideas.
To make them new.

Plagiarists make attempts at this.
And some are so ignorant...
They lift whole passages as if they can not be recognized.
That's how empty their minds and lives are!

AND then there are those who will boldly ASK...
If it is okay to put their name on 'your' efforts!
And then to others brag of their tasks.

But not for too long can they do this.
Repetition bores,
Even those who do not recognize what is presented...
Has no originality or freshness in it to begin with!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 13 May 2014

I enjoyed reading this one keep it up Mr pertillar

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Ramesh T A 25 October 2009

It takes me to the article Tradition and Modernity by T S Eliot wherein he says that past things are continuing in the present and will continue in the future too! Originality is impossible and only the dress is changing and there is nothing new! If it is old wine in a new bottle it will be only tasting better!

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