I was told absence makes the heart grow fonder
You disappeared far beyond and wandered away down yonder
To where I know not, but my spirit is with you, close with yours
Into life, love, peace and in saying thanks, you opened all doors
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An informative piece about the dangers of smoking, I gave up seven years ago and wish I had never smoked at all, I also lost my partner who had emphysema, well done for writing this, Lynda xx
as an x- smoker, i know what you say is true, and i had promised my wife and daughter when i moved to florida, i would stop. i was on the patch for two weeks and then threw them away and went cold turkey. now my wifes brother in laws lungs are starting to collapse. i give this a double ten for the info that you spread in your poem.
A well penned poem and a good advice for those who auto-destroy themselves so -to- speak for the sake of pleasure (cigarette, alcohol etc...)
Fire at one end on the other end a fool definition of smoking aint it cool
very nice and descriptive poem indeed... well expressed.. I liked the note in which you end the poem, that is what most people say to me too.. Believe in my self... very good and inspirational poem to any one.. with lots of lve shan