No, they are not stars...
This, my dreams shine in the sky...
No, it not a rain...
They be tears ours of angels...
No, these not a grey hair...
It only begins a snowfall of snowdrops....
No, they are not stars...
i guess this is much better if you are going to have this as a collaborative poetry...others will continue to finish this creation..........nice poem...10+++
nice to read this self-conversation... attractive poetic lines
No this is not the sun But my anger blazing in the sky.............. wow good work..........
Ah, Tsira, you write such lovely thoughts and ideas. Your poems are rich in images and warmth. Very nicely done.10
What a nice write, short but you say so much. It flows so easily.10+
life and the nostalgia it carries with it in the face of realities that awaits ahead...nice work Tsira...10
Truly admirable...first you and then your poem :)
beautifully you connect one to another...nice poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful line, ... such sadness... 'no they are not stars' they are the pieces of my heart!