Im stepping out of the dark and in to the light
so u can see wat u've done to me
u will see tears of blood and
the bruise u gave me
If only u knew how many night I sat
and cry over u
If only u knew how much i want this to work
I love u very very much, like words cant even explain
how much I love u, but u dont feel the same way
so Im stuck with the pain
The pain of u not feeling the same way
and breaking my heart slowly but very painful
I LOVE THIS POEM CAUSE SOMETHING LIKE THAT HAPPENED TO ME...
beautifully written...sounds like what just happened to me!
This poem is really sad but completely awesome. I like the way you portray your emotions.
nicely written.....sry u have felt these emotions at such a young age......your heart will bend....'i promise' Brian
Something most ppl go thru, the only difference is u wer able 2 articulately write it as a poem... Keep writing Jazmine ur work is realy gd.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow! ! i feel you bro. i'm going down the same drain.