No Win Poem by Dorsey Baker

No Win



in a fight between
human beings
everybody hurts
nobody wins!

Wednesday, June 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 21 June 2017

Dorsey, obviously you need to expand this! Try for a vivid image that embodies your thought instead of out-right telling the reader your sentiment. Maybe read lots of good contemporary poetry to be guided and inspired (Mary Oliver, Billy Collins) . If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC

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