Dorsey Baker


A Very Shapely Girl - Poem by Dorsey Baker

A very shapely girl
a diamond bracelet she wore
around one of her ankles
a black pearl ear ring she wore
in one of her ears
a strange but intoxicating
hint of emotion
in her dark but sexy eyes
she wore shape emphasizing
clothes
totally aware of her shapely body
she came in and sat down
in a chair
facing the door
posing like a model
taking a photo shoot!

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about A Very Shapely Girl by Dorsey Baker

  • Chinedu Dike (5/21/2018 7:22:00 PM)

    Lovely descriptive piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Dorsey. (Report)Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (4/7/2018 9:01:00 AM)

    A nice poem. Found nothing wrong in it. Some comments are truly disgusting and outrageous! (Report)Reply

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  • Poet Poet (4/7/2018 12:06:00 AM)

    COMMENT CONTD PH RESTRICTIONS OF WORDS 300...There's is a vast choice for humans appreciate else remain silent You may move on to better pastures...where you graze alone but silently Poetry is not today every man's cup of tea, many love coffee.. (Report)Reply

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  • Poet Poet (4/7/2018 12:03:00 AM)

    O commentators....All poets write out of personal experience one's own minds exultation... never decry an artist what so ever... it's not necessary to comment..no one asked you to and if your own mind is shallow and vision blurred twill be better you moved on to another world... why meddle with a poetic herd and try just to offend the poet he or she has not composed it for you there are 7.5 billion can any poet including you make all stand up for you. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/6/2018 5:09:00 PM)

    posing like a model
    taking a photo shoot!

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    Who knows what a degrading, vulgar life you lead;
    how horrible the surroundings must have been
    when you posed to have this picture taken;
    what a cheap soul you must have..

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/6/2018 2:19:00 PM)

    She came in and sat down! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

    (4/6/2018 8:47:00 PM)

    Your comment counts for nought.

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (4/6/2018 12:10:00 PM)

    How observant you are! Till the finest details, makes the poem containing more sensuality than poetry, but that is the signature of the poet Dorsey, I reckon. Congrats on being chosen as Member Poem Of The Day! A 10 Vote. (Report)Reply

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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/6/2018 10:09:00 AM)

    Poems must go beyond the physical chamth and sensual description. There was an age in Oriental poetry when description of woman's body was the most favoured theme.
    I think it is high time to get over and think about their safety and beauty of mind.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (4/6/2018 6:32:00 AM)

    Congrats! Amazing poem, touching and impressive. (Report)Reply

    (4/6/2018 7:04:00 AM)

    Amazing, that word is reserved for excellence. It doesn't fit this effort.

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  • Rajnish Manga (4/6/2018 4:12:00 AM)

    A very lively portrait of a glamorous girl created with lovely words. Great work.
    A very shapely girl
    posing like a model
    taking a photo shoot!
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  • Drtony Brahmin (4/6/2018 4:11:00 AM)

    she came in and sat down
    in a chair
    facing the door
    posing like a model
    taking a photo shoot! .......... a fine poem fine images. thank u dear poetess.. congrats! ! !
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  • (4/6/2018 4:04:00 AM)

    Indians do run this site. It smells like curry. Can anyone tell what I'd win if I scratched off that dot in the middle of their forehead? (Report)Reply

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  • (4/6/2018 1:22:00 AM)

    wonderfully penned here wo (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/6/2018 12:25:00 AM)

    Dorsey, such a lovely poem penned in shape...congrats for being chosen... huge 10++++ (Report)Reply

    (4/6/2018 3:20:00 AM)

    You are a joke on this site.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 16, 2018



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