A Very Shapely Girl Poem by Dorsey Baker

A Very Shapely Girl

Rating: 4.6


A very shapely girl
a diamond bracelet she wore
around one of her ankles
a black pearl ear ring she wore
in one of her ears
a strange but intoxicating
hint of emotion
in her dark but sexy eyes
she wore shape emphasizing
clothes
totally aware of her shapely body
she came in and sat down
in a chair
facing the door
posing like a model
taking a photo shoot!

Friday, February 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 06 April 2018

Poems must go beyond the physical chamth and sensual description. There was an age in Oriental poetry when description of woman's body was the most favoured theme. I think it is high time to get over and think about their safety and beauty of mind.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 April 2018

Congrats! Amazing poem, touching and impressive.

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Comment 06 April 2018

Amazing, that word is reserved for excellence. It doesn't fit this effort.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2018

She came in and sat down! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edward 06 April 2018

Your comment counts for nought.

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Chinedu Dike 21 May 2018

Lovely descriptive piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Dorsey.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 April 2018

A nice poem. Found nothing wrong in it. Some comments are truly disgusting and outrageous!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 April 2018

COMMENT CONTD PH RESTRICTIONS OF WORDS 300...There's is a vast choice for humans appreciate else remain silent You may move on to better pastures...where you graze alone but silently Poetry is not today every man's cup of tea, many love coffee..

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 April 2018

O commentators....All poets write out of personal experience one's own minds exultation... never decry an artist what so ever... it's not necessary to comment..no one asked you to and if your own mind is shallow and vision blurred twill be better you moved on to another world... why meddle with a poetic herd and try just to offend the poet he or she has not composed it for you there are 7.5 billion can any poet including you make all stand up for you.

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Ravi Kopra 06 April 2018

posing like a model taking a photo shoot! *** Who knows what a degrading, vulgar life you lead; how horrible the surroundings must have been when you posed to have this picture taken; what a cheap soul you must have.. -

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