You Come And Then You Go Poem by Dorsey Baker

You Come And Then You Go

Rating: 4.5


When you arrive
you let me know
that you are alive
You come and then
You go
at the table of desire
we get pleasure
and we get pain
and sometimes
our tears
they fall
just like the rain
You come and
then you go
the sun
is going down
its light
is fading
slowly in the sky
You come and then
You go
just like a whisper
in the night
You come and then
You go

Friday, November 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 18 December 2019

You come and then You go at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain/// beautiful writings yeah love comes and goes, love brings happiness, pleasure when it comes with smiling but when it goes with tears then we get pain and hurt inside heart as well as at the table of desire/// beautiful poetic expression

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 December 2019

An expressive poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece......10++

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Kingsley Egbukole 22 November 2019

Expression of an unsteady relationship. Well written...10.

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Irfanulla Shariff 22 November 2019

A very thoughtful and touching write! Thanks for sharing, Dorsey.10+

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 December 2019

You come and then You go just like a whisper in the night You come and then You go.. very fine full of emotions.. thank u. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 October 2020

at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain and sometimes our tears they fall just like the rain simple human feelings and reactions very well portrayed. tony

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Chinedu Dike 28 January 2020

Really a poignant bit of verse, very passionate with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Savita Tyagi 18 December 2019

Great poem. Relationships have their ups and downs. One looks backs fondly on all the memories with certain sweetness and the sting of a thorn. Congratulations for member poem place.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 18 December 2019

Loved the poem which sounds simple, but highly emotional! Touches the right cord in our heart! The lines which are memorable to me - " at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain and sometimes our tears they fall just like the rain" What a beautiful rhythmic flow!

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Lyn Paul 18 December 2019

It falls down to lack of respect from loved ones. Who needs this? Happy Festive season.

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