Nobody's There Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Nobody's There

Rating: 5.0


The stop lights still change,
though nobody's there.
The music still plays, though
nobody's listening.
A child cry's a cry for help,
but, nobody hears.
A rose blooms, a sun sets, a flame
dances to the song of the wind. The
night plays a soft lullabye, to those
who'll listen. A child is born, an elder
dies, a shooting star goes by. A tear
falls. But, nobody see's.

Wednesday, June 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lost,time,loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
age 15
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 15 June 2017

How true and how sad! Too many times good things happen and nobody notices. On the other hand, everybody seems to notice the bad things!

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Rebecca Navarre 17 June 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kim, For Such A Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Yes, Unfortunately True, Wish Kindness, Love, And Peace, Would Show Stronger Through! ! ! ! ! You Are An Incredibly Wonderful And Amazing Poet! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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