Not All Can Write Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Not All Can Write



Not all can write
With novel ideas to ignite
It is poet only
Who shares it rally

It is visionary part
That stays apart
From artificial feeling
And shares it with human being

Even though it is known
And fate is accepted when wind is blown
Either in favor
Or in disfavor

It is not the poems
That concerns
But theme that surrounds
It always sounds

Many hands come around
To share the concern on ground
Poor and rich commonly share
Fight with devil and dare

We all cry in despair
When nothing is fair
We shed tears
And commonly fear

If you can give common language
A feeling fully inscribed on page
That shall be read often
After all we are all human

Wednesday, January 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 January 2015

Your story lines are more than interesting and poetically creative, however you need to improve your structure so that your linage flows smoothly from top to bottom which will enable your poems to be recognized at their full value. Keep that pen pumping! ~FjR~

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2015

Not all can write With novel ideas to ignite

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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