Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Not Another Pizza Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was to come to our house
around five pm to have dinner with us
She had specifically requested
her Mother's family recipe for pepper steak
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Ted Sheridan
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Elysabeth Faslund 16 July 2007

Ted, the wording of this poem is exactly the way almost all fathers think and act. Good for you! My father would tell me, at 15, 'Girl, your two brothers gave me trouble...but you're going to kill me.' I am sending this poem off to another father! ! ! ! xxElysabeth

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Chris Mendros 07 May 2007

made me laugh. This is about as down-to-eart and honest as it gets. Nice work.

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fanniesson - 01 May 2007

I’m gonna give you this only cos I’m at war with my daughter this week nice read enjoyed next week who knows!

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Chuck Audette 25 April 2007

yikes, so that's what it's like... chuck

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