Not Autumn Poem by Glen Kappy

Not Autumn

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from 'While Passing Through'/Summer

Not autumn yet—
this why the sentinel crow
"caws" from his post?

Tuesday, September 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,bird,fall,summer,summer time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 28 September 2017

A puzzling moment when the crow, that harbinger of dark things, calls out on a summer day. And you almost think, The crow mist be right - it must be autumn. But the doubt lasts only as long as it takes to recite a haiku and you're back in your summer mood. Stop confusing us, crow!

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Glen Kappy 28 September 2017

just when i was thinking it's almost but not quite autumn (i was on a walk) the caw from above somewhat startled me. i saw no other crows nearby, and it was unusual to see one here in warm weather. and i wondered if he was communicating that it was premature to fly into town and take over... btw, have you seen my senryu titled crow? your talent and training for imagining yourself into a scene revealed itself again. thank you, daniel.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2017

Amazing haiku is shared expressing perception here.10

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Glen Kappy 20 September 2017

thank you, kumarmani. i was walking mid-morning yesterday when this crow startled me with his call from directly above me. i saw no other crows, but they are more common here when the weather gets colder. -glen

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