If you were
To touch me
In some ways
I couldn't
Understand
Would it make me
Less of a man
Would your warm hand
Open my eyes
To morning's light
In awful fright
Would my blindness
Search out your light
Would my deafness
Cry out for sound
Would my taste for love
Lose essence in Above
Would I cry tonight
Not knowing why
Beautiful, ethereal, haunting. Would my blindness search out your light Wondrously rich lyricism, my friend. Bravo.
Seamus, thank you so much for your very positive feedback. Ethereal and haunting are two of my favourite words, esp. when it's describing poetry.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem won me over with the first four lines...I feel love is just that. A person touches your life, your heart and your mind and you never fully understand why or how it happened.10 +++++
Thank you, Sister Frances for your insights and positive feedback. Greatly appreciate the 10, but it didn't register. Thanks for your support.