Not Poems Alone Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India

Not Poems Alone

Rating: 5.0
 


Poetry is not about to write alone
It is about suffering undergone
It is about misery around and pathetic seen
The cuckoo’s voice and bright sun shine

It confines not nature alone true
It covers subject not experienced through
It has required words exposure
To be given thrust with powerful posture

Your mood works as powerful force
Gets into job without any remorse
After morning prayers it swings into action
Brings more zeal into words sections

It is not work of the mind
It is divine blessing that flows in kind
Real thoughts flow in stream
As if coming from powerful beam

Poet thinks of no unnatural things
He has to offer something
It is natural gift and widely appreciated
Sometimes condemned and sometimes well related

Skill is never doubted
The broad base thought is well accepted
The point may be focused on humanity
That is where we are all one and pray almighty

Thoughts come across and vanish
They roam in ocean like fishes
Clash with mind and disappear
Sometimes impose views and appear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Poetry is not about to write alone It is about suffering undergone

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Needs lots of work Richard Layne19 minutes ago Too many conflicting styles or writing withing poem. Word usage where it is unique doesn't seem to truly convey the desired message.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Amen! Suyog Upadhaya24 minutes ago Your view is amazing and the way you have portrayed what Poetry means and how the individual's mindset influences it makes it such a good read. Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Sarah Poieo23 minutes ago Good structure and style Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Amen! Suyog Upadhaya1 hour ago Your view is amazing and the way you have portrayed what Poetry means and how the individual's mindset influences it makes it such a good read.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Mohammad Jahoorul Islam likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Post Very good Justin Blair23 minutes ago Very meaningful, and very good! Comment 0 a poem of need

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Alan Green 'Guppyman'23 minutes ago the poet tells of all of a soul true to thier chosenart

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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