Not Prufrock Poem by Barry Middleton

Not Prufrock



how young he was
to claim these lines
it took me a lifetime
to nearly understand

many words frame
an old man's fears
always there is much
for backward looking
yet he looked forward

scholars still wonder
who is he addressing
I know the girl's name
but will not tell you
that's how poets are
leave something misty
for silver haired debate

one thing is obvious
he does not care
for growing old
looking forward
to small visions
life's chattering
he beckons her and I
to follow the ramble

I have rambled
through the fog
left and right
academic prattle
fooled them all
with foolish faces

there are no prophets
but if there were
who would choose
the rack of constant
inquisition, who would
so do I dare, do I

better to be the claws
poetry burned with me
none left for dissection
comfort in a meeker fate
no brouhaha for me

but something I plead
something he pleaded
with gods and devils
whose arms we embrace

the sea awaits
the maiden lingers
consumed in lace
by the garden gate
she turns away
like the turning tide
like a vision that
arrives too late
mermaids or Sirens
call me to darkness
call from where
I do not know
riding seaward
into waters
I have never
seen before

Monday, March 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: age,death,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Reaction to The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Middleton 14 March 2016

I see you like Baudelaire. You may enjoy my poem The Swan, especially if you are familiar with Baudelaire's poem of the same title.

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Souren Mondal 14 March 2016

Thank you for responding to my comment and suggesting me such a wonderful poem.. I commented on 'The Swan'.. But I forgot to mention one thing... The swansong is usually sweet, but in your poem it must have been painful and agonising.. Thanks again Barry.. The two poems of yours that I read had made me raise a very valid question - 'Why did I not read you before? ? '... But as the question has arised I hope to read a lot more from you.. Thanks for making me THINK with your poem.. Thinking is my favourite activity in the world.

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Souren Mondal 14 March 2016

Wow! This seems perfect to the T.. The same mysticism that was there in Prufrock is here too.. I really like the idea of how you decided (as far as I understood) to actually celebrate the sublime feeling that Eliot's fine poem gives us rather than trying to respond to it in an academic manner.. No 'brouhaha'... That is a very nice mantra in APPRECIATING works of art.. Your poem, for me, does not mere stand as a poem in response to 'Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock' by T. Sterns Eliot, but a celebration, a valid artistic appreciation of a poem that had captured the imagination of us all poetry lovers.. Thanks for sharing Barry.

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Dimitrios Galanis 14 March 2016

Bravo Souren, that you have discovered Barry.I regard him a real poet.Most of his poems are jewels to love astounded.

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Barry Middleton 14 March 2016

Thanks so much for your comment. You hit the metaphorical nail squarely on its head. And yes I hate academic analysis. The thing that truly amazes me about Eliot's poem is how young he was when he wrote it.

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