Like smoky clouds wandering in the sky,
I long for you without letting out a cry.
Devoured by lust i crave for you,
My lust for you is what you despise,
but that's what i feel and i cannot disguise.
I have seen it in your eyes,
I have heard it in your sighs.
Carnal desires are no sin,
for when i touch you,
even your tears gleam with a smile.
So begin your journey into my arms,
let me drown into your soul.
Now is the moment, now is the time,
for our lives might take us apart,
it's only just a matter of time.
'copyright 2010 siddharth singh'.
I like your smoky gray clouds and the urgency of your title. Young or old, the moments are indeed counting down. Warm regards, Sandra
When reading this out loud it was if i was singing it it would make a really rad song I like though the way you go in and out of rhyme is at times confusing though all in all I like it which says alot because i really dont usually care for rhyming poetry :)
amazing! ! ! ! ! beautiful words from a beatuiful soul surely the one whom you love will be thrilled to read it. well done-surely a tenner from me with tons of love to you both anjali
‘…let me drown into your soul. …’ Here lies your genius…and if you merge in soul, ‘… apart, /it's only just a matter of time’ Time will become Timeless Fusion…please write more …I’m enriching my bosom 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
A poem honest to the core.....and so beautifully portrayed.
but that's what i feel icannot disguise you bring in the soul too lovely poem which is very honest
Amazing. Ur beautiful soul can b sensed in ur poems very easily.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Now is the time... very significant theme thanks for sharing... a piece to ponder....a call I love this.... Maia