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Forsaken.

Rating: 5.0

The moment you saw me
I knew you were hooked.
I knew by your sighs
and by the way you looked.

For you it was hard
I swear, I knew it from the start.
Still I wished for you to say,
thinking, with me was
where your future lay.

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Rup Pokharel 19 August 2009

I salute your emotion! ! ! so touching...... 10+

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Avinash Singh 14 August 2009

A very sensitive piece of work!

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Preeti Chauhan 02 August 2009

This one is quite touching..congratulations and wish you lots of luck..i hope to see more poems coming from your side.

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The moment you saw me I knew you were hooked. I knew by your sighs and by the way you looked. i was just for it... very good dear...keep it up...10 read mine miss i miis u..anywhere..love at first sight

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Lakshmi Venkataraman 22 July 2009

cute 1! ! ! nice! .......................great goin! !

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Pradyumna Jyotir 21 February 2010

very touchingly poeticised.

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Sandra Fowler 02 January 2010

Very touching and heartfelt. May your prayer bring peace to both of you. Happy New Year. Blessings from, Sandra

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Monica Singh 02 November 2009

whatever u write sweety seems as if it is directly coming out of ur heart. your usage of words simply extraordinary.

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 27 October 2009

So emotional so touching...Great! 10+++keep writing dear..

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Anupama Raghavendran 07 October 2009

a very touching poem abt love....

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