O Sweet Young Gal Poem by me poet yeps poet

O Sweet Young Gal

Rating: 4.5


At justeighteen
a teen

you compose such beautiful poetry
I am floored
but now you must also know
guys get controlled by genes and testosterone
between 16 to 19
and
then as gals get dubbed by hormones
so do guys
don't moan
maximum love must be given to all kids
between 16 to 19
it's then all in their minds
they can't clearly think
just at them
like a misty lover wink
and
pen your experience
O young lady
in your lovely
rosy fragrant ink

All will your love drink

Tuesday, June 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: imagery,kid
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 17 October 2018

A nice one! ! ! ....... It's wonderful.... I think it motivates teens.... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 September 2017

THANK YOU SIR AKHTAR JAWAD JANAABH SALLAMS

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Akhtar Jawad 02 September 2017

A sweet and touching gratitude to a teen aged poetess but you should have mentioned her name enabling us to read her poems. If it's your lovely imagination then your imagination is great.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 September 2017

Thank you Sir creative imagination Like, I posted one on you you perhaps over looked my tribute.It's difficult to work about this site I compose 13 or 15 poems daily and comment at least 100 consider it as my imagination But I bow to you O poet AKHTAR JAWAD JANAAB SALLAM

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 June 2017

Aha! ! With great flow and penmanship you have given the message. Enjoyed.

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Rajendra Rout 08 May 2018

I agree with you Anil sir

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 June 2017

I am sweet toothed akp

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