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O Sweet Young Gal - Poem by me poet yeps poet

At justeighteen
a teen

you compose such beautiful poetry
I am floored
but now you must also know
guys get controlled by genes and testosterone
between 16 to 19
and
then as gals get dubbed by hormones
so do guys
don't moan
maximum love must be given to all kids
between 16 to 19
it's then all in their minds
they can't clearly think
just at them
like a misty lover wink
and
pen your experience
O young lady
in your lovely
rosy fragrant ink

All will your love drink

Topic(s) of this poem: imagery, kid


Comments about O Sweet Young Gal by me poet yeps poet

  • Naila RaisNaila Rais (10/17/2018 9:41:00 PM)

    A nice one! ! ! ....... It's wonderful.... I think it motivates teens....
    Naila
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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (9/3/2017 1:44:00 PM)

    THANK YOU SIR AKHTAR JAWAD JANAABH SALLAMS (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (9/2/2017 8:53:00 PM)

    A sweet and touching gratitude to a teen aged poetess but you should have mentioned her name enabling us to read her poems. If it's your lovely imagination then your imagination is great. (Report)Reply

    Poet PoetPoet Poet(9/3/2017 1:43:00 PM)

    Thank you Sir creative imagination Like,
    I posted one on you you perhaps over looked my tribute.It's difficult to work about this site I compose 13 or 15 poems daily and comment at least 100
    consider it as my imagination

    But I bow to you O poet AKHTAR JAWAD JANAAB
    SALLAM

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (6/23/2017 9:55:00 PM)

    Aha! ! With great flow and penmanship you have given the message. Enjoyed. (Report)Reply

    Rajendra RoutRajendra Rout(5/8/2018 8:47:00 PM)

    I agree with you Anil sir

    Poet PoetPoet Poet(6/23/2017 9:58:00 PM)

    I am sweet toothed akp

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 20, 2017



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