O To Swim In Memories Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

O To Swim In Memories

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We came for a swim
In what looked to me a dream,
Water nor worries,
We swam in old memories,
Or so it did seem.
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Haiku | 07.09.13 |W

Saturday, October 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 06 October 2019

So crisp and short..... Yet..... the sloshing in memories seems so refreshing as a dip in a clear gurgling stream!

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 October 2019

Thanks for your interesting feedback, dear poet

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 October 2019

A fascinating description on how we dwell on memories. Another brilliant write.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 October 2019

Thank you for reading and liking it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2019

Dream is felt true ever. We swim in the pond of dream and in practically we swim in the pond of memories. A brilliant Haiku (poem) is astutely portrayed by you dear Pathak sir, thank you a lot.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 October 2019

Thank you so much for such appreciation, dear poet.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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