Observations..(Senryus) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Observations..(Senryus)

Rating: 5.0


Solar energy
Lights up the village homesteads
Not electric lamps

The blind student cries
He does not need a text book
He reads only Braille

Inebriated
Another glass of whiskey
He gets less frisky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 19 June 2009

Practical life word-lit.....nice

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lovely senryu's...the last one very much to my liking.....lol

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

good collection...meaningful words...poignant...10

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Marieta Maglas 01 July 2009

Solar energy for blind students...touching poem..10+

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Indira Babbellapati 01 July 2009

that's coool, sandra!

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Sandra Fowler 21 June 2009

You are a keen observer of the human condition. The second senryu is particularly poignant. 10, for you. As always, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 June 2009

Excellent observation.

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