Tuesday, April 3, 2007

Ocular Confectionery (Fun Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Optic gaze spies
Ocular confectionery
I shouldn't look
because I'm married
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JoAnn McGrath
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Duncan Wyllie 10 April 2007

A lesson in this one me thinks, well written again JoAnn Love duncan X

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David Harris 07 April 2007

JoJo, you definately have been reading too many fun poems. You have even got a sweet taste for them yourself. More chuckes and smiles with this one. Just loved it. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Theresa Moore 06 April 2007

dandy manly candy...fun write :)

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Marci Made 03 April 2007

As long as you 'look' you know you're still breathing.........as to 'eye candy' we can never have enough, as you shall later see here....This one puts a big old smile on my old face~~~~~~~~~thanks, jojo~~~~~~~marci. :) xo

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