Ocular Confectionery (Fun Poem) Poem by JoAnn McGrath

Ocular Confectionery (Fun Poem)

Rating: 5.0


Optic gaze spies
Ocular confectionery
I shouldn't look
because I'm married

Oh whats the harm
in looking don't touch
Wow! I see two
It's double dutch

Your so appealing
to my eye palate
Your mark is a 10
placed on my ballet

Should I stare longer
or go without?
Will my eyes rot
and maybe fall out?

Ocular confectionery
Oh sooooooo good
Don't call the dentist
Can't help if he could


3 April 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 10 April 2007

A lesson in this one me thinks, well written again JoAnn Love duncan X

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David Harris 07 April 2007

JoJo, you definately have been reading too many fun poems. You have even got a sweet taste for them yourself. More chuckes and smiles with this one. Just loved it. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Theresa Moore 06 April 2007

dandy manly candy...fun write :)

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Marci Made 03 April 2007

As long as you 'look' you know you're still breathing.........as to 'eye candy' we can never have enough, as you shall later see here....This one puts a big old smile on my old face~~~~~~~~~thanks, jojo~~~~~~~marci. :) xo

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