Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,023 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Odd In Favor - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Share
Your treasure
Or knowledge
On golden page

Speak with people
Who always struggle?
To meet two ends
As the day allows no amend

It is treacherous journey
With hills so sloppy
There exists danger all the times
Yet we never stop climbing

No hitch
When trying to reach
At the peak
With all attempts to speak

You may suffer
And engulfed with anger
Still life can be made smooth
After facing the real truth

Leave no stone unturned
As we have tried level best and turned
Odd in our favor
With integrity and honor

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/25/2015 11:15:00 AM)


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2015 8:47:00 PM)


    xDate & Time: 9/23/2015 11: 23: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 43270086 - Odd In Favor Member: Rajnish Manga Comment: One lesson that a man can learn from this inspirational poem is to have perseverance and not to give up your efforts in the face of odds as you have so nicely explained: As we have tried level best and turned / Odd in our favor / With integrity and honor
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2015 8:47:00 PM)


    welcome Nikhat Bano and JaiRam Tiwari like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/23/2015 12:22:00 PM)


    Amazing lines...........10+
    You may suffer
    And engulfed with anger
    Still life can be made smooth
    After facing the real truth
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  • Rajnish Manga (9/23/2015 11:23:00 AM)


    One lesson that a man can learn from this inspirational poem is to have perseverance and not to give up your efforts in the face of odds as you have so nicely explained:
    As we have tried level best and turned / Odd in our favor / With integrity and honor
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2015 11:04:00 AM)


    Leave no stone unturned
    As we have tried level best and turned
    Odd in our favor
    With integrity and honor
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 23, 2015



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