Flame flutters and tide wanes without reason,
Death drops shutters as life sinks in a pit,
Day looks dull when hind dark clouds hides the sun,
Night is moonless, no stars are still well-lit.
Life's throbbing breasts hide failing heart beneath
As if to mask a universal truth,
Unpalatable though, Death bares his teeth,
And when life dies all it dreams is of youth.
And man returns carrying no suitcase,
As life leaves amidst unfinished hopes hemmed,
As loveliest words get frozen on face,
O as rarest poems may die un-penned.
And as some life-long goals remain un-scored,
As one-sided love remains mute, wordless,
Life is set sailed to move across un-oared,
Towards a new life-term, sailing clueless,
As death comes two un-dotted times to dot,
To bring together two random journeys,
Sepulchral silence falls, church bells toll not,
The air thickens as if, freezes as breeze.
Frail like kid's paper boats life collapses,
A puddle's all it takes to soak and sink,
No world wind to tilt it to drown, just breeze,
The life when hastens to reach its last brink.
Yet, much maligned death, is no enemy
Of life— on a first-name term with many,
Pleased to walk with life till eternity,
For such largesse still he gets a penny!
To death, morrow may be the next moment,
His future tied on a tenuous thread,
He lives half-shut eyed, instant to instant,
And still the last goodbye is such a dread.
A twain between which a lot stays common:
Life lives fearing death, death of life unknown.
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Musings | 03.05.12 |
Topic: life, death
To death, morrow may be the next moment, His future tied on a tenuous thread, He lives half-shut eyed, instant to instant, And present spread is ready, hot and red...wonderful expression! I always find sparkling beauty in all your works! Extremely well penned with creditable structure!
death, is no enemy Of life— on a first-name term with many, Pleased to walk with life till eternity, .A wonderful meditation on life and death. man returns carrying no suitcase... loveliest poems remain un-penned........... sö much of philosophy in such a beautiful poem. i read and reread your poem. thank u. tony
Thank you Dr Antony, poets like you make my day worth its while.
Liked the third stanza.So poignant and gripping. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. A great poem.10++++ and on to my Poem List.
About the third stanza you talked about, I had to revisit my poem, and I agree with you. The fact that you felt like reading the poem again and write something more about it, I tend to feel, and believe what you say. Thank you.
A poignant, beautiful, insightful and brilliant write on life and death. Very moving lines that will grip a reader to go through with the whole write. All 9 stanzas of the poem stand out depicting and expressing in wonderful detail what death is.
Some poems, after they have been writ, give good feelings, you feel fulfilled. As a poet I don't know if you also felt so after writing some your poems more so. Thank you for the feedback.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a terrific work. As I reread it several times, I found the seventh stanza prompting me to Sonnet 18. A great poem, Aniruddha.
My favourite too, Mj Lemon. But I've not quite grasped your reference to 'Sonnet 18'. Can you throw some more light? You see, I'm closing on to 80s, and am bordering to be almost senile. Thank you for your encouraging comments.