Smoke your head off
We'll help you
And then...
We'll kick you
In the butt
And send you...
Flying...
To freedom...
Smoke-free
Freedom
Clean air breathing
Inhaling life
Exhaling poison
No longer gasping
For breath
Of Life
We'll help you
Live Life
To the fullest
Alive
Young
Energetic
Dying to be
Alive
Well help you
Richard Wlodarski September 2016
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Being a smoker myself, I had a fit of laughter after reading the first line of the poem. A very serious message nicely brought forth with a tinge of humour. It's probably not funny but somehow am still laughing... Thanks for this powerful advice Richard.
Chinedu, it's a serious message with definite comic overtones. I also laughed when I first wrote it....You're welcome.