Oh Michigan! Poem by Edmund V. Strolis

Oh Michigan!

Rating: 5.0


Oh Michigan, winter wonderland!
Let me peel off my wet socks
Hung now steaming above the fire

Such rewards the summer cuts
Of seasoned wood now crackling
Steaming too a bit
Some damp inner crevice sighing

Your iron gate eased wide creaking
A stony mouth exhales to heaven
As bare toes relish the glowing
Rewarded for their daily trudging

Oh Michigan of crystal winter skies
As blue as heaven dares display
A gift for all the flurried days
Dreams of spring can wait today

Friday, January 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: appreciation,home,simple,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 14 April 2018

As usual this is a gorgeous poem gorgeously written- - now may I ask you something? How can we bribe you to write more often? I miss your descriptives, the soul you put into your poems... shoot, I just miss seeing new poems from your pen. I give you 10's but I expect to see more poems, okay? Don't ever mess with a woman a-horseback.... ;)

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Glen Kappy 26 January 2018

I like this, Edmund! Excellent descriptions in Some damp inner crevice sighing and A stony mouth exhales to heaven. A great rhyming finish as well. Knowing the pleasures of a warming crackling fire (we’ve had hearth stoves in two of the three houses we’ve lived in) I well relate. Hoping you’re well in all ways, Glen

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Edmund Strolis 26 January 2018

It is bad enough to go beyond this 300 mark and be reminded but worse still for it to be lost! How do I recreate what is a sincere thought. Why it is that people meddle with technology and ruin what was a good format is beyond me. Nonetheless thank you Glen...hope all is well.

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Norah Tunney 20 January 2018

This poem warms the cockles of my heart. What a beautiful picture you paint I want to take the next flight to Michigan and enjoy that winter wonderland. Here in the Rockies it's warmer than usual and hardly any snow so far.But through you Edmund I get a taste of one of my favorite seasons. Delightful and heartwarming.

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Sarah Persson 20 January 2018

Oh how that makes me want to be in Michigan right now. I can feel the heat from the crackling fire and almost smell the steaming socks haha. The stoney mouth exhales to heaven. A wonderful poem Eddie. Warms my soul.

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Leah Ross 19 January 2018

very nice well penned takes the mind there

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