Oh My Dear Mom! Poem by Merlin Thattil
Oh My Dear Mom!
I tossed, I jumped
I had fun, lots of fun
Yes! I am in your womb;
It pained You, Oh my Mom!
But a smile curved on your cheek.
Nine months, ten days-
Gone without haste;
Oh! Time to come out
Anxious hours for you Mom.
Suffocation, struggles
It pained you a lot?
But I had no other way
To see you; So I come out.
I bid adieu
To your womb, my first home;
To see my dear Mom
To live in my second home.
Smiles all around,
Happiness seen around,
Rather exotic moment
To see strange faces.
Amidst strange faces
Ah! A familiar face
Mom, I need you,
Your warmth, Oh My Mom!
Time went by
like a sped arrow,
And you mould Me.
Into what I am now.
I fail to express,
My love for you
With a word of thanks
Or a precious gift.
All I have with Me
I give it to you-
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hi merlin, A nice poem, come from deep of your heart. u made me to remember my mom for a while... Thank u
The greatness of maa is expressed in beautiful rhymes. Good work.It is heart touching :)
Merlin that is the best tribute to a mom I have ever seem in a poem. I love your sincerety and excitement about coming out..... But you apoligize for any discomfort in your loving way........ Then there you are..... Nothing less than the very highest mark for you young lady....... wonderful work of art......... Jim Troy
A good start with a nice poem, Merlin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
love this line I fail to express, My love for you With a word of thanks Or a precious gift. All I have with Me I give it to you- wonderful write. good job
Our indebtness to the lady cannot be expressed in words.But your attempt was marvellous, especially calling the womb as our first home.
A very precious work of art. Just the best tribute to a mother a person could ever want to give. Yor even apoligize for causing her the pain of birth But what a rewaed you give to her.......There you are......... Wonderful............. Your sinserety shines Jim Troy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 5:38:16 AM # 1.0.0.1119
simply wonderful...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !