Kay Barcelon

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Ohh Annie... - Poem by Kay Barcelon

Last night I had a dream
I was looking for my dog
Where is my beautiful yorkshire?
Tired and out of breath
Keep on walking and looking
In the nearby pond
I found a lot of dogs
Big dogs small dogs
All dead floating
I finally found Sinta
Down below by my feet
Almost invisible in the dirty pond
I picked her up very carefully
She was all brown like caramel
I was going to give up and cry
But instead I pumped her small chest
Really carefully not to hurt her
Then she coughed up water
After three or four times
Her color changed back
Black and gold
Her hair started to shine
And when I slightly caressed her hair
Mustard starts appearing
Underneath her wet hair
She was all covered with mustard!
I woke up
I was thinking “what a dream”
Then I looked for Sinta
She was lying down by my feet
Sleeping... Snoring...
And then I slightly caressed her hair
At Five o'clock
Still tired from walking all night I got up
Brushed my teeth and made some coffee
I checked my phone messages
This is bad news
My sister passed away


Comments about Ohh Annie... by Kay Barcelon

  • (11/14/2007 6:55:00 AM)

    Kay you will have other dreams with your sister on happier times the times you laughed and had fun you are an angel Kay like your sis, Dave Love you xxx (Report)Reply

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  • (11/14/2007 6:26:00 AM)

    She was like a sister to me, a very good friend. I love you, Ate Annie. God bless you. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 25, 2011


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