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Old Before Your Time (Don't Wanna Be)

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No place to run, no place to hide,
Oh how the bright lights shine,
all the bad news, I let it slide,
don't wanna be old before my time.

This is where I am & what I wanna do,
I just want to play all the time,
we shall never be, you and me,
sad and old before our time

There's a life out there, a life to choose,
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Old Before Your Time (Don't Wanna Be)
Monday, July 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,old age ,optimism,time,work
Chinedu Dike 24 August 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Peter Strugnell 18 August 2020

Thank you Don Kubicki for taking the time to read and comment, thanks for pointing out the error, I've gone back and corrected it. It should read " don't wanna be old before my time" , (if I can help it)

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 August 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Peter S. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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