Old Temple Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Old Temple



In the small old temple
in the lonsome hour
the tile floor before the Idol
of the God
silently echoed to me
the prayers of poor people
the prayers of aged womaen
since centuries back.

In that solitude
it reflected
their worries and pains
their faith and devotion
for generations.

Monday, July 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling,old age ,prayer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem written after visiting the temple of Anuprabu at Nabadwipdham, West Bengal.The temple was constructed by Rajrishi Bhgyachandra eighteenth Century king of Manipur
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2018

Though I haven't visited this temple yet feel the beauty ans serenity of it by means of yor inscription. I too know from your poet's note that this temple of Anuprabu at Nabadwipdham, West Benga was constructed by Rajrishi Bhgyachandra eighteenth Century king of Manipur. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 October 2017

In lonely hours! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Hans Vr 29 July 2017

While reading this poem, I could feel the respect for and the ever lasting effects of heartfelt prayers. I do agree that something very special and supernatural shines from old places of worship. Excellent poem!

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Rajesh Thankappan 11 July 2017

Where else can one seek solance for worries past and present. A brilliant potrayal of the everday problem that plagues people, especially in their old age.

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Rajnish Manga 10 July 2017

I don't know the backdrop against which the poem has been written. But to me it brings to fore the life of scores of widows in Vrindavan living and praying and waiting for their eternal salvation. Nicely portraed. Thanks, Dear Mr. Singh.

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