Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Thursday, November 1, 2018

Old Wes 10: Wes Is Obsessed (Rondeau) Comments

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Wes is obsessed; is that a crime?
He posts this picture all the time.
The girl is pretty; that's for sure,
But I can't take it anymore!
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wes vogler 08 November 2018

The funny thing is that I have discovered she is very famous as a artist. I have a good eye. My wife catches me at this devious activity and I become shameful to the lowest degree. Hey I am an artist and need the anatomical inspiration

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doug scotney 01 November 2018

as did McCrae, you slipped two limericks into that rondeau

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Kim Barney 01 November 2018

Doug, you are very observant. The rhyme pattern is indeed that of the limerick in those two cases, but the syllable count is wrong. You are to be commended in any case for noticing that. However, I DID slip a limerick into the last five lines of my poem 'All I Need is a Cape'.

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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