Old Wounds Whisper But In Vain Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Old Wounds Whisper But In Vain



The sole idea was things to sort—
Sort out long drawn silence ‘tween us,
To coax feelings into focus,
Seashore was last arbiter court.

But words sounded like wavy sea,
Billowed in like smothering smoke,
And silence felt far too heavy,
Feelings remained as if in cloak.

All I somehow could manage was
To scribble some words in wet sand
In hope, sea breeze would help our cause,
Make her respond fair, things to mend.

Notso happened to help hurt heart,
Nor was magic destined to be.
To our divided destiny
We drifted way farther apart.

Today on that shore once again,
I find old wounds whisper in vain.
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Musings | 12.01.2019 |

Monday, May 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,silence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
So near nigh and still so far! One more step, one more gesture would have done the trick, but that was not to be— the drama of life and love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 May 2019

Notso happened to help hurt heart, Nor was magic destined to be. To our divided destiny We drifted way farther apart.......much impressive lines. Beautiful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 May 2019

Yes Kumarmaniji sometimes things just don't mend, thanks for the feedback.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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