Red sniffs the colors of love
Glimpse of love is in silence
Red shower in the war front and grieve
Time plots its form on the red spot
Violence endanger on the lap of red
Grumpiness moves on the cart of red
Power moves in the yard of red
Life is on the wheel of red
There on the liveliness its form is red
Stream inside the body is red
Nature congruent on the lap of red
Light loom on the chart of red
Red may be the fathom of creator
That rise on the strand and whisper
Charted form of life is red
That withdraws to the beam light! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Charted form of life is red That withdraws to the beam light! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A nice write, significance of red color can not be denied.
Beautiful poem Salini. Red is the beautiful colour. Beautiful lines.... Red sniffs the colors of love Glimpse of love is in silence Red is the colour of war dipped in blood.... I loved the conclusion.. Charted form of life is red That withdraws to the beam light! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Loved it.
Red is the most powerful color. it can be seen from the farthest distance. Red is the color of life. color of beginning of day and night is red. red is the stream of life.Beautiful composition of red through your poem. certainly deserving full marks.
The poem in such wonderful word power suitable to reciting in such easy way actually highlights the humanity and its existence but always threatens by the war which a poet can't be blind. A beautiful wordpower and poem and I likes it in that spirit of reading.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Secrets of nature revealed here through this wonderful piece scripted beautifully.....and red may be the favourite thing of the creator should be kept in mind..... a tenner from me