On Life - Some Philosophical Thoughts. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

On Life - Some Philosophical Thoughts.

Rating: 5.0


As I walk through life alone, I wonder
What you must be thinking about me,
My LIFE...That, am I trying to escape,
Or to take you for granted?

Many tried these futile things,
No one ever succeeded.
All in the end, repented.
As if they were mindless.

To teach us many lessons,
All you try is the different ways,
All fail to grasp that wisdom,
Even without any hardest trait.

Those who lived, said in the end,
Nothing was a bit more than,
a blink of an eyelid,
Happy moments flew away,
Sorrow appeared, it crawled.

In the flashback we see our faults,
Don't know how to react,
Accept them as our mistakes,
Or plea innocence and defend.

Whatever it be, in the end,
Only time will smile.
It will leave us half the way,
And quickly it will fly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 20 March 2021

Very matured poetry. High on philosophy.

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Gordon Walter 20 March 2021

Life teaches bitter and better lessons. Great philosophical poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2021

Deep philosophy expression is made on life. This is nice poem.

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me poet yeps poet 18 March 2021

VERY NICE AND THANKS FOR THE CONGRATS MOMS SMILES 475/500 BUT SAD THIS NEW FORMAT IS NOT EXCITING AT ALL EARLIER WE INTERACTED OVER HUNDEDS READ US DAILY OW MAX IS ABOUT 8 ONLY I WONDER WHETER PH IS LIKING IT

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Indira Renganathan 18 March 2021

You are too young....but with this much matured thoughts....great meaningful poem....5*****

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