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I looked behind me
and I saw the mountains
in their silence-night and day,
but deep with-in
tears and sweat that crept
and to the earth life,
who’s solitude is my strength
and carriage to take one more step
to reach the other side of me

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Hi! pal, Nice poem though I suggest to put your titles in words than numbers...

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 22 August 2009

Great poetic expression!

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 29 July 2009

Very straightforward in your presentation. Good write.

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Saadat Tahir 09 July 2009

a very refelctive and phylosophical poem...my friend very well written cheers

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Manonton Dalan 25 September 2008

walk to the other side before the sun sets. nice poem. thanks md.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Nice and lucid composition.

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