Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Once I Loved Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

Switch off the TV, stop all sounds
Shut down the comp, turn off the lights
Let no one come calling
When I am alone.
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Dinesh Nair
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Dinesh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 April 2015

Very nicely and aptly presented. Fantastic speculation. Beautiful poem. Many thanks dear Dinesh, keep the ball the rolling. ......10

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Patricia Grantham 20 June 2013

A very poignant and powerful poem. You poured your heart and soul out on this one. Good depths of thought. Thanks for sharing.

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Anjali Sinha 28 March 2009

once I loved hope but now I cannot cope lifes hills too slope so now I grope-Good write --10+ Anjali

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 27 March 2009

Once I love hope But since now i cannot cope ascending on life's steep slope Now I hate hope..........Good Write..........10+++......

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Mamta Agarwal 26 March 2009

the title itself catches attention and gives some inkling of what the poet wants to say. but the dark imagery completely overwhelms. i like the confidence you express in the last stanza. very powerful write Dinesh. disturbing...to begin with yet, lingering last lines. 10 Mamta

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Sreelekha Premjit 11 April 2008

The strong sense of despair is so powerfully brought out in your poem that it lingers in the mind.

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