Switch off the TV, stop all sounds
Shut down the comp, turn off the lights
Let no one come calling
When I am alone.
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Very nicely and aptly presented. Fantastic speculation. Beautiful poem. Many thanks dear Dinesh, keep the ball the rolling. ......10
A very poignant and powerful poem. You poured your heart and soul out on this one. Good depths of thought. Thanks for sharing.
once I loved hope but now I cannot cope lifes hills too slope so now I grope-Good write --10+ Anjali
Once I love hope But since now i cannot cope ascending on life's steep slope Now I hate hope..........Good Write..........10+++......
the title itself catches attention and gives some inkling of what the poet wants to say. but the dark imagery completely overwhelms. i like the confidence you express in the last stanza. very powerful write Dinesh. disturbing...to begin with yet, lingering last lines. 10 Mamta
The strong sense of despair is so powerfully brought out in your poem that it lingers in the mind.
A sublime start with a nice poem, Dinesh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.