Once I Talked To The Colors Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Once I Talked To The Colors

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In search of colors I went to the flowers
I asked the violet, "Why you are violet? "
"God has designed me to suck the violence
I have been sucking this poison, I regret,
every time I was faded before I could suck it all.
Alas! I am a flower so small! "

I asked the blue wild indigo, "Why you are indigo? "
"God has designed me to suck the wildness
I have been sucking this poison, I regret,
I could not change an animal into a man
my capacity to suck is limited.
Alas! I am a flower so small! "

I asked the blue Iris, "Why you are blue? "
"God has designed me to suck the ignorance
I have been sucking ignorance, I regret,
I sucked much of it but couldn't spread wisdom,
I am empty now but man is not yet wise.
Alas! I am a flower so small! "

I asked the green Bells, "I don't listen to your bells! "
"God has designed a church within me,
and my bells had been inviting for centuries,
but hate is more colorful than love,
I am constrained to remain silent now.
Alas! I am a flower so small! "

I asked the yellow sun flower, "Why do you love the sun? "
"God has designed me to promote friendship
I'm a true friend and I don't mind sun's harmful radiations
I use it as a catalyst to change my nectar in edible oil,
couldn't teach the man to change enmity in friendship.
Alas! I am a flower so small!

I asked an orange Bird of Paradise, "Where is paradise? "
"God has designed me to convey a message
both Heaven and Hell are within you,
you carry it on your shoulders.
But man reads my message when he can't change his load.
Alas! I am a flower so small! "

I asked a red rose, "Are you a message of love? "
"I have been, but the man has changed me,
now I am a message of bloodshed and fire,
in the name of love they're promoting hate,
May I advise? Don't talk the colors,
watch silently a white rose and feel its fragrance.
Alas! I am not a white flower! "

Friday, December 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: colors
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashika 08 December 2017

Nice imagination. Well scripted.Thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 11 December 2017

An interesting dialogue with flowers! God has a plan for attributing certain qualities to each of his creation and each one is unique! This uniqueness creates variety! The way you have concluded the poem is a pointer to the bitter reality of the times. The red color of the rose which was a symbol of love has now turned into the color of bloodshed!

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Indira Renganathan 10 December 2017

The way you imagine for the taken theme and bring out that in words is really awesome and laudable....indeed you are a great poet

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 December 2017

An amazing write full of delight. It conveys the differences and attributes from each and everyone. Yet such attributes could be changed due to man's intervention....Interesting piece....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2017

A wonderful poem! Talents differ. God has attributed each object of nature a different purpose and value. Each has a different need, diverse trait with specific utility. A marvelous rose cannot be equated with a Sunflower, Green Bells, Blue Iris, Wild indigo or any kind of flower have their different charm and utility! Your ‘once I talked to the colors’ is an insightful piece of work! Thanks dear sir for sharing………..10

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Khalid Saifullah 09 December 2017

A nice poem, poet's imagination is astonishing................................

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