Wednesday, March 20, 2024

One Day At A Time-Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Golden sun setting.
Time woven and embedding.
Life can't be undone.
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Rebecca Navarre
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 September 2024

Love it Rebecca Thanks for sharing this bravo-worthy haiku

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Anjandev Roy 07 September 2024

Excellent short work..... thanks for sharing.....

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 20 March 2024

A bit of rhyming and excellent word placement make a haiku more enjoyable. In haikus we have only few words to play with. Liked

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