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One Evening I Saw The Life- Couplet

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One evening on the banks of the river, I saw the LIFE
Flying like a bird, trying to cross the horizon.

One evening in a flower garden, I saw the LIFE,
Fluttering like a butterfly, hovering to suck nectar from all flowers.

One evening by the sea shore, I saw the LIFE
Dancing on the waves, trying to hit every rock.

One evening near a mountain, I saw the LIFE
Talking to the clouds and playing by the river.

One evening at the poetic show, I saw the LIFE
Plummeting like the candle and spreading lights.

Today evening on the sand dunes, I saw the LIFE
Tired and fatigue, burdened by several wishes to accomplish.
Saturday, March 20, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical
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COMMENTS
Zoyza Da Vinka 22 March 2021
We expect too much from the life don't we? Brilliant poem.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2021
The evening you saw in life is truly very beautiful evening that carries light of glorious mind.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2021
Birds fly with due freedom and we realize this truth. The waves dance and nice sensation is made with deep perception. This poem is very interestingly written.
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Captain Cur 21 March 2021
Truly spoken! We can only accomplish so much with one life! But I imagine as a LIFE gets tired and fatigued there will always be another to take its place!
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Kostas Lagos 21 March 2021
This poem of yours is truly a masterpiece!
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Suzon Albert 20 March 2021
One evening I also saw LIFE crawling to live and it smiled at me. Superb.
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Michael Jack 20 March 2021
Better to keep it simple and remain contented rather than carrying a bag on the the back.
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Poetic Sky 20 March 2021
Hunger and to have everything leads no where. One evening in a flower garden, I saw the LIFE, Fluttering like a butterfly, hovering to nectar from all flowers.
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Gordon Walter 20 March 2021
We poets are sensitive to all happenings. One evening at the poetic show, I saw the LIFE Plummeting like the candle and spreading lights.
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Gordon Walter 20 March 2021
We expect so much from LIFE and we repent later. Thought provoking couplets. Good one, I liked it.
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