One Last Time Poem by ritty patnaik

One Last Time

Rating: 5.0


trying to savour,
the moments
of the waning light'
before season of life
slips by.

trying to pick up
pebbles of joy,
seems far away now!
collected they are
a life time.
scattered they are
milestones,
signed by divine.

trying to find,
the demure moon,
in moonless night.
immagining beams,
scattered, onroof tops,
and windows
to light my face,
with shafts of white.

trying to breathe,
scented fragrance
of delicate sweetpeas,
before the fragrance is lost
to the drone of bees.

one last time,
trying to feel
on my face,
the early morning breeze,
that touches,
the green leaves
unfurls!
giving vitality to survive,

yet i wonder,
why not me? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 02 October 2009

wonderful poem, expressive and beautifully crafted. loved it. thank you.

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Ejaz Khan 28 September 2009

I liked this soft and beautiful poem, very effective write with a great flow!

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I agree with Randy what a lovely piece of poetry this is. There are delightful images throughout and it reads so contained, yet so fluently down the page. Just beautiful....10 love Karin

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Raj Nandy 23 September 2009

This is a lovely piece of poetry! I wonder how I had missed it out initially? ! 10! - Raj

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Jean Dament 21 September 2009

I loved this one with it's great flow, descriptions & imagery. Thanks for sharing your talents with us. It really has heart. Ravensong

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