One Life To Live. Poem by Sandra Feldman

One Life To Live.

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What is life?
So brief and fair,
A careless breath
That goes, no where
That can be blown
Away,
Without a care,
So fair, so weak
So unprotected
From Evil's, stare!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2023

Love the metaphor of the careless breath...so perfectly summing up the carelessness of some lives. Also, ... great rhythmic flow!

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Sandra Feldman 10 April 2023

How sweetly said, I am so grateful for your kind words that sustain!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 April 2023

Wonderful piece Sandra TFS

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Sandra Feldman 09 April 2023

Thank you for reading and for your comment.

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So unprotected is life.True but we swim along.good poem

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Sandra Feldman 08 April 2023

Quite so, quite so. Thanks so much for reading and for your comment.

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