One Of The Day's Dead Poem by Daniel Brick

One Of The Day's Dead

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I was almost a prince. My father
favored me over his first-born son.
He was delighted as I excelled
again and again in the arts of fighting.
He gave me his retired great sword, and said
holding my shoulders tightly, "Practice until
this sword is an extension of your arm."
I trained with that beloved sword day after day
until it became part of my body. But my father
also engaged the SophistAnagoras to teach me
how to think. From him I learned to plan
a strategy, to balance strength with cunning,
to think beyond just the killing stroke.
When Anagoras told my father I was his finest
student, my father's pride in me made me
the proudest of sons. I listened to my father,
to my teachers, to the prophet Calchas
with his knowledge of the gods and goddesses,
to old and seasoned warriors, to a priestess of
Isis. Oh, I was so prepared for the battle over Troy.
On the voyage across the Aegean, I sharpened the point
of my father's sword so it would puncture armor.
I was prepared. I leaped onto Trojan shore
with a dozen others, and looked around
for my first victim. But behind me a Trojan warrior
lifted a huge rock, and smashed my brain into my skull.
Hermes guided me into the Land of the Dead. His face was
sad. I didn't know a god could be sad, but Hermes was.
"This is your human fate, ephebe. You lived a good life,
making your father proud. Do not think of yourself
as just one of the day's dead. You had your shining moment,
on the plains before Troy, and it was a heroic death."

Saturday, March 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 08 April 2020

daniel, it's been a while since i've read the iliad, if indeed this story can be found there. that aside, i take this poem as a reminder that each person who dies has her or his story, each one not to be merely grouped as the countless dead or a bloodless statistic. -glen

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2020

This poem which you have presented from your past memory has made us emotional. This is excellently penned and treasured with time and reader's memory. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2020

Your father was very much affectionate towards you. You were properly nourished by him as a first born son. He had favoured you a lot as a prince. You had listened to your father, to your teachers, to the prophet Calchas with his knowledge of the Gods and Goddesses with great satisfaction and pleasure. You had learnt a lots of things. But war was so sad to take away life. Death provokes thought and gives sorrow. Separation of son with a father was so sad.

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Rajnish Manga 21 March 2020

that beloved sword....became part of my body (From) Anagoras I learned to plan a strategy, to balance strength with cunning.... //... Great poem written in a classic epic style which ends in the tragic death of a hero mourned even by the Gods. Thanks.

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