One's Fairy Tale Through At The Night Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

One's Fairy Tale Through At The Night

Rating: 4.5


The rain doesn't frighten more our garden.................
Here we have met once, first time at last.................
And a ravens has departed from a branch pink.........
Only the small nightingale sings is sweet today here...
So the moon will think up a new fairy-tale for this day
As one more history of one thousand one night.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 18 May 2009

ARABIAN NIGHTS? .............very beautiful. I wrote rather a long poem.........RENDEZVOUS.......

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009

'Only the small nightingale sings is sweet today here... So the moon will think up a new fairy-tale for this day As one more history of one thousand one night.......' I always get very interesting imagery in your poem.10++

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Sue Sie 16 May 2009

The rain did not wash away these wonderful images you portray..10++

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Fay Slimm 16 May 2009

'The moon will think up a new fairy tale' - that is a lovely image Tsira..... super write.....10 + +++ Fay.xx

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Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009

This is so lovely Tsira...your words bring these images to life....Fi 10++++

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Costa Anakiev 29 May 2009

Dear Tsira, again your dreams led you in the thick forest of grammar mistakes. Konstantin.

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Sandra Fowler 28 May 2009

May the moon never fail to paint a fairytale in your enchanted garden, Lovely work, Tsira.10/10. Love, SandraX

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 25 May 2009

lucky nightingale :) lovely poem, thanks for sharing 10

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William Roberts 18 May 2009

This is very pretty. Though if the moon is really Scheherazade we have to worry about what would happen if she didn't think up a fairy tale every night. We'd be looking at a lot of moonless nights.

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Muhammad Ali 18 May 2009

very lovely piece, so touchy and soft! ! 10.. Ali

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