Only Eyes Are Closed To Open Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Only Eyes Are Closed To Open

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I am on bed and many are thinking,
That I have slept in deepness of hope,
But I am not sleeping, I am dreaming,
Only my eyes are closed to open again.

I am hearing the words they are saying,
Discussion is going on about creation,
All are saying this is much wonderful,
I am wandering in galaxy of my mind.

On bed I am but this is just like sleeping,
But I am swimming in sky of imagination.
Actually I am searching for something,
I hope I shall get this soon in inner core.

Closing eyes still I am seeing this universe,
Feeling eternal light inside and God's love,
Opening eyes still I feel this wonderful mind,
I am on bed but I am motivated by new light.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,14 September 2017. All rights reserved.

Thursday, September 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,lifestyle,perception,vision
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Through blinking of eyes we can feel better. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 12 August 2018

An excellent poem about the profound effect of lucid dreaming! Magnificent writing, Kumarmani!

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Rini Shibu 14 September 2017

Swimming in the sky of imagination and finding the light and God's love.. Beautiful

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Qiniso Mogale 14 September 2017

I'm wandering in galaxy of my mind. Well penned. Only eyes are closed to open. It's the flesh that sleeps, the spirit explores going where the flesh can never reach. Wonderful!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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