Only In My Dreams Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

Only In My Dreams

Rating: 5.0


I feel like I’m broke
I can’t find myself, my pieces were been broke
My heart doesn’t recognize your presence
‘Cause you changed a lot, not the usual essence

I’m walking alone
But you do not care, you only stare and yawn
What happen? And why you seem so heartless?
I guess I can’t turn back the time and feel rest

Can I see you smile?
Can I hear your voice, saying my name and file?
Maybe in my dreams, my tears fell suddenly
I can’t help myself, it is, naturally

I need apprehend
I should have to held high wholely and to lend
Days have been past, I need to forget you
So, this heartaches gone and could sleep at taboo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 27 July 2010

Good write well expressed....

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Antonio Liao 25 July 2010

like meadow that bloom flower, where the rendezvous of all the flying animal play...each verse you share...lives forever to the readers......a beautiful swing of poetry....God bless a 10 +++

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Whisperkwane Lamb 25 July 2010

wow! speak of a dream...dreams sometimes do not make sense...when a dream is in pieces it speaks to one all broken up...I feel lost reading your words...but I understand a broken dream...as well as a broken heart...the two match...making feeling hard to bear...I get you Sheldon slow at frist..but I get you, ...

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 25 July 2010

In some way, I can relate to your poem. Seems to me, dreams are disassociated memories and are difficult to sort out or make sense of.Nice write

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 July 2010

well expressed. and the words are arranged the way you can make a reader feel what you feel....

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