! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***onto Eternity***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***onto Eternity***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
in every night star stands and stares
dulcet dawn to come waking by warmth
tea cup in hand spewing scented fumes
eying all through the raves by news
yesterday is something different today
morning is never same by the evening
yet in between there lies history unknown
night never knows very freshness of sun rising
pyramid stands by its elusive strangeness
lest owes of tears slogs onto eternity
whom should we bespeaks of rune of mystery?
time when slowly slithers to edge of kisses
do their love smolder wilting ethereal?
as of lost planets shuffling in black-holes
universe fails to measure their quantum forces
rigidity of all dimensions when loses its strength
beauty yet never dies by a blooming flower
heart remembers fragrant petals of soigne rose
cloud never hides grace of love by attrition
yet love may be illusive by sultry vision.
This goes beyond deepness yet the intellectual minds see the depth
a wonderful poem, nice imagery, ......liked it..... and thanks for your new year wishes, a very happy new year 2010 to you too! !
From : Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (karur India; Male; 53) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/28/2009 11: 48: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : HI ON TO ETERNITY, NICE ONE
Beauty, yet never dies by blooming flowers...Truely poetic! Nice reading..
From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !
An excellent piece of poetry, full of striking images & contrasts...
Wonderful poem...eternity is always tomorrow spoken by the past ++10 regards
Nice poem doc...my girlfriend calls me Dr. John. The Dr. of love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 1:06:32 PM # 1.0.0
This is wonderful, I loved the powerful imagery and the way your words flow together. I also read some of your other works and enjoyed reading each and everyone of them. Keep on writing there is always room for improvement.