Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,669 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***love Of Tears***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Trust divine as love embedded in truth
as day descends slowly by the light
moments rill on faltering art of darkness
listless yet heretical words tossed up
into fossils of kisses in impregnation

eyes look back to lost iridescence
yet ruefully blither by lurid decadence
crouching upon spatiality of reason
as heart loses gentle grace by adulation
yet blue refrains to whispers to rainbow

space flickers by dwarf memories
on threshold of intimacy from crowd
who knows tomorrow may reconcile
as letting chaste of truth to obscurity
love of tears spins on chord of tangency
slopping a shadow miffing in aberration

Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***love Of Tears***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 by Dr subhendu kar

  • (2/22/2010 6:55:00 AM)

    Feeling spilling tolling [Ring slowly] on my psyche …and waiting for billing…[free]
    The price is Pure Joy
    Thanks for such a poem….words are to me dumb and fossilized sorry..
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • (2/17/2010 5:51:00 PM)

    i have no idea what the poem is about but thats probably because of my lack of education with vocabulary... i do feel alot of emotions and passion merging out of each verse... it brought tears to my eyes... beautifully written :) (Report) Reply

  • (2/13/2010 6:40:00 AM)

    Very touching poem, beautifully crafted.A great feelings.. (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (2/7/2010 8:08:00 PM)

    So deep is the love of tears expressed in a nice poetical manner. (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2010 11:53:00 AM)

    Exceptional! Love and tears linked together along this sojourn. (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2010 12:04:00 AM)

    lovely poem
    even when one is very happy
    there can be tears of joy.........
    i like your style dear Shub
    its an unique one-you are
    really original
    and dont seem to be influenced by any other poet
    unlike me--I can be influenced by justttttt any one here
    maybe someday I'll write a sequel to yoursss
    till then-have a good day
    a tenner from me
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  • (2/4/2010 6:42:00 AM)

    i really like your style...
    i enjoyed so much...
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  • (2/2/2010 3:53:00 PM)

    ''space flickers by dwarf memories
    on threshold of intimacy from crowd
    who knows tomorrow may reconcile''

    these are simple lines but great impact to readers..so nice, so touching, so gentle to the ears of the readers..smileeeeee
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  • (2/2/2010 5:10:00 AM)

    A poem which touches your heart.....eloquent...and poignant. (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 4:54:00 AM)

    Fine presentation...........Thought provoking! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 3:35:00 AM)

    A touching poem, well crafted around a nice metaphor. (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (1/30/2010 12:11:00 PM)

    A poignant piece embellished with extraordinary metaphors and a very rich vocabulary 10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2010 4:29:00 AM)

    interesting visual metaphor
    into fossils of kisses in impregnation

    interesting metaphorical poem, very well written


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  • (1/28/2010 8:31:00 PM)

    I agree with the ladies below, you have manufactured a very beautiful poem, written it seems with some hint of pragmatism. You have touched on love and truth, yet ends with a Love of Tears. Good write Doc, I liked it extreamely well. Your friend Lynn (Report) Reply

  • (1/28/2010 5:20:00 PM)

    Beauty, your word are liquid rubies. 'as heart loses gentle grace by adulation' (Report) Reply

  • Miriam Maia Padua (1/28/2010 6:04:00 AM)

    all the verses are very touching...
    words create a very vivid picture of a lost love....
    from a wonderful words of metaphors to a beautiful and touching pictures of a lost love..
    amazing way of expressing feelings through very amazing and impressive words..
    words from a very brilliant, poetic mind....
    As always, you never fail to impress us with your superb vocabulary, superb poetry....
    Thanks for sharing....

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 26, 2010

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